If countries are serious about solving traffic problem, they should tax private car heavily. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Traffic congestion is headache problem in many cities. Therefore, some government schemed to lessen private car on the roads by imposing high tax. However, as every solution that will be applied, benefits and drawbacks will always be there and the following essay will discuss them in details.
It is undeniable that levying heavy tax on private car would raise price and decrease consumption. Carmakers would pass this amount of tax to consumer as the form of higher price and this would lead to people not being able to afford a car because it is too expensive. A car may become a luxury item and people need to consider carefully before deciding to buy it. Additionally, the number of private car running on the roads would reduce and usage public transportation instead of would be growing trend. As a result, traffic jam would slowly decline. Furthermore, collection of huge tax from car owner will be used to improve public transportation such as bus, train, metro or upgrade transport infrastructure like roads, bridges, motorway, highway, car park…which in turn leads to better traffic.
On the contrary, the policy of imposing high tax on private vehicles would cause finance burden for people, who live in areas which are not covered by public transportation such as rural area or countryside. For these people, a car is an indispensable mean to go to work or go to other places. Besides, it is a fact that when consumption of car fall drops, automotive industry may face with status of revenue going down. Hence, owner of these businesses need to calculate to reduce cost correlatively, it may cause increasing unemployment if carmakers decide to narrow dimension and cut labor cost.
In conclusion, I believe that the way of increasing high tax on private vehicle may help government to solve traffic problem to some extents. However, to maximize effectiveness of this solution, we should consider carefully all aspects of implement this policy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06481481481 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89234749967 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4289143525 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169479094629 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620204564055 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442409968184 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1040269012 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278898660626 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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