If an individual had been given an option to select between leading a life not doing anything and working too much, he would have selected the easy life that does not involve any work. This essay agrees that people opt for living without work if they have to choose between two choices because they do not prefer to struggle with a great deal of stress and fond of having a huge amount of free time.
Currently, all most all employments involve a large amount of mental pressure. In other words, white-collar professionals suffer greatly from mental stress as they have to involve in critical decisions, such as improving the quality of a product and creating an appealing work environment for everyone, while blue-collar professions tackle the stress due to the physical strain of their jobs. Therefore, many employees and employers work without job satisfaction. Put simply, they just work for the sake of making a living, not for pleasure. This is supported by a recent study conducted at Oxford University, in which they claimed that 95% of workers are willing to leave their jobs if they can obtain government benefits.
In addition, a person spends two-thirds of his life at his workplace. It simply means that only a third is left for everything including entertainment. Were people to live without a job, they can lead a life full of joy. For instance, they will spend time traveling, listening to music, watching movies, hiking, and climbing mountains. According to the annual newsletter of the National Labor Department, 90% of workers’ traveling inspirations are restricted by their jobs.
In conclusion, a person will choose not to do anything for living to work hard if he is offered an opportunity. This essay agrees with this statement because everyone prefers to live without being pressurised and to have a joyful life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[2]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: Where; We
...for everything including entertainment. Were people to live without a job, they can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, third, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01954397394 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78659116947 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596091205212 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6022252272 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339431500768 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107951266203 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105266358709 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229077170682 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140382751635 0.056905535591 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.