If a person is given a choice between life without work and working a lot, he would prefer to have a life without work. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that some people would opt for a life without work instead of working intensively, in case they had to choose between the two. In my opinion, although I think that a life without work appears an appealing idea, it can satisfy the human being only for a certain period.
First of all, it is commonly known that a person spends virtually a lifetime at work. He or she works countless hours in order to earn a salary high enough so that they can afford to pay for the living expenses, the essential needs and other things that bring joy in their lives. Therefore, a person is dependent on money for most of their lives. If one stops working, he or she is likely to run out of financial resources in a couple of months and, consequently, this might negatively affect their state of mind.
Furthermore, people constantly need activities to entertain them. A job frequently instills a sense of competition into employees' mindsets. Most people partly enjoy receiving laborious tasks because they are keen on getting promoted to a highly regarded and better-paid position at some point in time. A person has to benefit from an environment where they can show and enrich their knowledge, their skills and abilities, in other words he or she seeks reassurance that his or her work is valuable.
To conclude, I strongly believe that taking into account both the advantages and drawbacks of working, it is worth spending a great part of the life at work, rather than staying jobless. I think that people would be overall more content with a life including an amount of time dedicated to working.
Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'as to', 'i think', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.196078431373 0.247107183377 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0686274509804 0.0946595960268 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0653594771242 0.0501214627716 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0849673202614 0.0437548338989 194% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.150326797386 0.122226691241 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0555555555556 0.0403226058552 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63977947134 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0294117647059 0.0326793684256 90% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0849673202614 0.0861772015684 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0196078431373 0.021408717616 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00326797385621 0.011925033212 27% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1605.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75268817204 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329749103943 0.374742101984 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232974910394 0.28420135186 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172043010753 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118279569892 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63977947134 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 69.9389208214 60.7387585426 115% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 23.25 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1905938263 49.517814964 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.75 127.492653851 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 46.5474910394 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.26804123711 1.69124875643 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266338992239 0.332605444948 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0769915033949 0.102741220458 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0604732608264 0.0668466124924 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.542714587047 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171207288567 0.148594505496 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104477495317 0.134430193775 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668518227083 0.0742795772207 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.244007027077 0.324371583561 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0587027864589 0.0638462369009 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178474314768 0.228012699653 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039519570082 0.058150111329 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.