Imagine a foreigner from developed country plans to visit your city. What would he like and dislike about your city?
Nowadays, tourism in all the countries became more popular than before, thus lots of foreigners are visiting different cities in number of countries. My self living in a city name Surat, which is located on the bank of river Tapi in the Gujarat state of India.
Firstly, my city follows the ancient culture that every Indian has "Atithi Devo Bhavh", meaning that every guest is welcomed and we treat them like god. Any non-Indian who comes to our city is surprised by out politeness and humbleness. In ancient time my city had the one of the biggest business of spices and still now my city is famous for its spicy food and refreshments, for my city there is a saying "Kashi nu Maran ane Surat nu Jaman", means as the remains of a person is put at Kashi in river Ganga is best for him, same food is our city is best to eat. Apart from food we are currently a best growing city in the area on business. The whole new Diamond hub is just created in the outskirts of Surat, thus the whole diamond industry is growing in my city, which is a very beautiful place to visit and it is attracting a whole lot of businessmen to our city.
Furthermore, as per year 2020 my city has became the cleanest city in Gujarat and the second cleanest city in whole India. Our cleanliness is appreciated by any foreigners who came to visit the city. On the contrary, some of my cities area is under developed and the people are living there is below the poverty line, that any foreigners can dislike. Some other things such as apart from being cleanest city in Gujarat, few people are still throwing waste and garbage here and there and spit anywhere they like.
In conclusion, a foreigner is planning to visit my city, than food and business opportunities will blow his mind, but there are some areas that he/she will not like.
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| 2020-11-09 | Kaishal Ozarker | 73 | view |
| 2020-11-09 | Kaishal Ozarker | 63 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 616, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...o eat. Apart from food we are currently a best growing city in the area on busine...
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Line 3, column 849, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...l place to visit and it is attracting a whole lot of businessmen to our city. Furtherm...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...rthermore, as per year 2020 my city has became the cleanest city in Gujarat and the se...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'being the cleanest'.
Suggestion: being the cleanest
...e. Some other things such as apart from being cleanest city in Gujarat, few people are still t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, still, thus, apart from, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5498489426 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51201873643 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519637462236 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2910027028 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250407199406 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101030834026 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398865081299 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161663952448 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340625048224 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.