Immigration has a major impact on society what are the main reasons of immigration to what consequences can it lead

Essay topics:

Immigration has a major impact on society what are the main reasons of immigration to what consequences can it lead.

Immigration has a significant impact on contemporary in society each year more or more people decide to leave their country but they moved to another place in this essay I will examine the reason and consequences of immigration

In my point of view the main reason of immigration is strong desire of people for better life and save future. A lots of people so called third word people move to develop the country for better employment, opportunities and therefore, higher income more were living in wealthy countries implies living in country with stable economy.For example, the labour migration in Mexico to the USA is caused by this act other reason whole family forced to cross the borders and conflicts of their culture of homeland so they migrate for the better and safe future of their children.
However, there are many consequences of immigration it has a negative impact on both immigrants and their countries of destinations first of all refuses cannot find job because they face the lack of language problems and because they do not understanding the language and also difficulty in adaptation. Secondly, he refuses have not received good food and medical care due to they are at the race but many European Union start the program to help those refuses.

To recapitulate, I believe that people have a strong desire to save future then they move to other countries apart from them it has also consequences on the health and create other problems.

Votes
Average: 5.8 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: A lot; Lots
...people for better life and save future. A lots of people so called third word people m...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...s living in country with stable economy.For example, the labour migration in Mexico...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, apart from, for example, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95528455285 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72239083491 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.317153274 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 243.8 106.682146367 229% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.2 20.7667163134 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.8 7.06120827912 323% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162531752467 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909508056424 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104056911951 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107844663293 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773779455845 0.056905535591 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 13.0946893788 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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