In recent years, plants and animals at risk of extinction have increased dramatically. People are now understanding the importance of biodiversity. For this reason, many efforts have been made to preserve nature and maintain balance in the ecosystem. In this essay, there are some solutions that can be done.
The first approach is the government must pass laws and prohibit activities that caused environmental degradation. The amount of toxic chemical waste that produced by factories and released in nature should be controlled. Another feasible action is to apply strict and standardized regulations for waste purification in combination with regular inspections of these industrial facilities. Animal hunting for commercial purposes and entertainment should also be banned. For instance, in Africa, hunters could pay money to be allowed to shoot down lions and elephants, which are dying out in number at alarming rates.
The most effective solution is to educate people to obey the rules and protect the environment. The government can bring to people a good knowledge by media, holding conference and seminar. Students in school and colleges should also be taught how to protect flora and fauna. I believe that these steps create people's awareness and active participation in environmental protection and show its results in a longer run.
An alternative strategy would be to do more investment for more research to maintain rare species. In this way, it is possible to save some endangered species. However, in absence of good implementation plan, this policy may not provide desired results.
To conclude, more efforts must be made to preserve the biodiversity and it requires the participation of the public and the government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good knowledge'.
Suggestion: good knowledge
...ent. The government can bring to people a good knowledge by media, holding conference and semina...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43382352941 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06291263727 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4070425279 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9411764706 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76470588235 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203894789237 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582000422071 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638939935486 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111978329251 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047999529473 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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