Increase in the price of the petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic & pollution problems.
To what extent do u agree or disagree?
what other measures do u think might be effective?
Traffic & Pollution has been rising worldwide for past few years ,which becomes hazardous for the health ,so our govt. have to take some imperative decisions regarding these issues ,Rising the price of the petrol is one of those corrective measures.
Firstly, if the Govt. increases the price of petrol then it directly put sinister effects on the demand of the vehicles (which runs on petrol), due to which People have to think twice before buying and using a car which will help in mitigating the traffic as well as pollution .By increasing the prices of petrol , govt is indirectly persuading people to move to public transportation and to use Eco friendly fuels like CNG and LPG.
IN Addition, as we all know that the petrol is non-renewable resource , which means it is available in limited quantity. Declining the prices of the petrol will also help us to save petrol for the next generation otherwise they would not be able to use this fuel.
On the contrary, if govt. elevates the price of the petrol, then the price of other products will be hiked as it will increase the logistics cost. So people have to suffer more as then they need to pay more prices for the petrol as well as for other products. Due to rise in price middle class have to suffer the most as it will be hard for them to use self transport for essential purposes.
So it can be concluded that rise in price of the petrol is not the appropriate measure to deal with these problems as its disadvantages outweigh the advantages, despite we can use other measures like by raising the interest rates on car loans , so that people cannot finance the car and the Govt should persuade or encourage people to switch to Eco friendly means of transport by reducing their prices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, then, well, as for, in addition, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66990291262 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51205181307 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.561755894193 93% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => OK
Sentence length SD: 123.309930026 49.4020404114 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.181818182 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167624472283 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639254368955 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492970204166 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981991733376 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273585375096 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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