An increasing number of people are buying what they want need online. what are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online.
Currently, purchasing products via online becomes a popular trend in the modern life. There is an increase in total of customers using this service. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of this method for personal and companies.
To begin with, this way of buying products has some positive impacts on both individuals and enterprises to go shopping on the internet. First and foremost, this method is time saving for customers to buy anything they want without going out for shopping at brick-mortal stores. For example, people can be at their home and with only a simple action such as click the icon, products that they choose will be distributed door - to - door. Secondly, shopping online saves money for both customers and companies. In the term of individuals, the can compare the price of the same items in a range of shops and choose the store which has the cheapest price. Meanwhile, shopkeepers also decrease the overheat costs like rents, a huge amount of money for electronics or hiring employees. Moreover, companies also have a chance to enhance their public image through advertisements on the internet. Due to the fact that more and more people spend a lot of time on surfing the web, shopping onlive plays an integral part for increasing revenur for business.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of shopping online. Firstly, customers can have trouble on purchasing something which do not have as good quality as advertisements. It is clearly seen that there are a bunch of business make the most of products' features on the advertisement programs to attract people to buy their good while the real standard of theses products are not good. This makes loose the truth of a large number of customers when buying via internet. In addition, the products may be not fit for buyers. For instance, when people spend money on ordering clothes on the internet, the do not have chance to try on them, therefor garment that they buy can not suitable for customers.
In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks of shopping online, I outweigh the advantages which this advanced technology bring for both personal and companies. As a result, this method should be carried out more popularly and more effectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bunches'?
Suggestion: bunches
...ts. It is clearly seen that there are a bunch of business make the most of products f...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the products') or simply say ''most products''.
Suggestion: most of the products; most products
... there are a bunch of business make the most of products features on the advertisement programs ...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...not good. This makes loose the truth of a large number of customers when buying via internet. In ...
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Line 5, column 606, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ey on ordering clothes on the internet, the do not have chance to try on them, therefo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98138297872 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70936799883 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529255319149 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4078129736 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5789473684 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.68421052632 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266869217163 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795748111311 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622733325078 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146305950353 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518036208469 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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