An increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times during their life. Is this a positive or negative development?
These days，it is common for people to change their jobs and migrate to different cities. Despite some disadvantages that do exist, I personally believe that this trend can be beneficial to citizens’ job prospects as well as personal life.
Changing career paths can have desirable impacts on one’s professional development. For example, working as a social worker can help people improve interpersonal skills, while working as a researcher allows people to enhance their analytical skills and critical thinking skills. By exploring different careers, individuals will be able to gain knowledge from multiples fields and improve their skill set. Therefore, they will become more competitive in the labor market since they are able to view problems from a different perspective and apply the previous work experience to their current job.
Moreover, changing residential areas can benefit one’s personal development. For example, moving to a foreign country allows people to gain insight into a different culture. People can have a better understanding of their social norms, value system and traditional lifestyles by communicating with the local people, thereby broadening their horizons. With these experiences, they will be more inclusive and embrace multiculturalism.
However, some potential risks may occur when people change their job and living areas. For instance, people may feel isolated after they move to a new city because they may have no friend. Mental health will suffer if they fail to broaden their friend cycle and lack of social interactions. Also, people may perform poorly at their new job because they do not acquire essential expertise and work skills, which can discourage them to pursue their career goal.
In conclusion, I strongly argue that changing one’s career and living places is a positive trend, although it may have undesirable effects on individuals’ personal life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55442176871 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88645676445 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4276639313 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.866666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229634586317 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828610573623 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512892399962 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138328122982 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157871385047 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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