An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer counties to work in developed countries.
What problems does this cause?
what can be done to deal with this situation?
Nowadays, The issue of brain drain has gained great popularity as numerous professionals prefer to migrate to well- developed nations in seek of sound pay scale and higher standard of living which their home countries fail to provide. However, Moving to some other country by specialists affect their own economy in adverse way.This essay will address associated problems and will suggest some solutions.
First and foremost problem faced by home nation of migrating professionals is underdevelopment of economy. As they moved to other counties they will unable to generate any income for their own country. So country will suffer in terms of lo national income which sometimes results into depression in the economy. To cite an example, Half of the people employed in NASA belong to India. Instead of working in US, If they start work for India then Indian space system will be good enough.
Secondly,Migration of specialists into another countries can results into lack of good services in their home nations as people will unable to get the benefit of expert-ism of those professionals. So they have to rely on other nations for services like medical facilities, tutor and many more which will bring huge cost.For example, Einstein developed Atomic energy with financial assistance of US. So his home country Germany had to invest huge funds to produce own such energy.
To address these problems, government can take several initiatives such as providing high remuneration to retain professionals.Moreover, Government should create tons of job opportunities for them.A feeling of patriotism should be created in the hearts of students by their teachers and parents as well. so that they devote themselves for development of their own nations.For instance, Despite lot of opportunities in abroad, APJ Abdul Kalaam, Missile man of India, preferred to work for Indian defense system.
To sum up, Migration of professionals in developed nations is great threat to their own countries. I opine that effective measures shall be taken by government and on individual level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33130699088 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04111204175 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4977654931 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.285714286 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153099210661 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569677621067 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348187163986 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937697393863 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249364256923 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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