increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems,to what extend do you agree or disagree,what other measures do you think might be effective?

Essay topics:

increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems,to what extend do you agree or disagree,what other measures do you think might be effective?

Nowadays the main problem of cities is the air-pollution. Meanwhile, the government tries to control this disaster by some ideas. The inclination of the petrol price is the way to maintain the problem and reduce traffic jams, while someone does not agree with this opinion.

The positive opinion about the growth in the petrol price is can encourage people to use public transportations, also it can be an idea to reluctant them to drive their own car in unimportant situations. In addition, the vital population problem of these days about air-pollution will be solved.

also, the increament in the price of petrol may enforce the higher life-price to people. To exemplify, if the price of gasolin is changed, the price of transportation will increase, then the markets have to sell thing more expensive than before.

All in all, the price growth of petrol has an effect in many parts of our daily life, which should be useful or harmful for mankind economic observations.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...about air-pollution will be solved. also, the increament in the price of petrol ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 163.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03067484663 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87222726952 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650306748466 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5708353406 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140962034719 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560602766378 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404124356897 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797912910677 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00375241795579 0.056905535591 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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