With the growing population comes growing demand to serve larger population. increased population further adds on to increased traffic and pollution issues which the world is currently facing. The solution to this would be to increase the price of petrol which will eventually solve the problem to some extent.
Firstly, with up surging prices of fuel, utilization of private vehicles will reduce and people will opt for government or public transportations to overcome the monetary drain. Increase use of public transportation will further lessen the traffic as lesser vehicle occupancy on road. Secondly pollution will lessen due to decrease demand and also lesser modes of travelling.
Currently, with modernization carpooling is trending in, with more than few individuals sharing a single transport like car for travelling to a common workplace. This is a common trend seen nowadays in Bangalore, due to increased fuel prices. Not only does this save time and creates lesser on road anxiety which most individuals suffer from. Due to variations in prices of fuel, people opt for public modes which are cheaper more individual friendly with lesser accident statistics.
Other measures such as assessing vehicles through emission tests, planting more trees, using electronic vehicles ,banning old vehicles which emit higher range of smoke and taking a walk for nearby commute or a cycle would work beneficially to support reduce pollution. Lastly, stringent government laws for excessive production of pollution should be applied.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Increased
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'single transport'.
Suggestion: single transport
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54661016949 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80810107169 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618644067797 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4441501875 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.083333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109388741762 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486489557459 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491358842071 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760886565377 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706804877422 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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