Individual actions have little or no effect on climate change. For this reason, worthwhile change can only be made at government level.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give the reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
It is irrefutable that climate change is a major cause of concern for everyone around the world and it is continuing to get notably worse. Many argue that humans have contributed no positive impact to vital changes needed. Therefore, I believe that governments must be more accountable in providing solutions to environmental concerns as well as with the participation of all citizens. 58
Obviously, there is no doubt that CO2 and greenhouse gas emissions need to be the real impact of the nation level because they have the powerful enough to control the problems. The government holds financial budget resource as well as a policy of laws that enforces the related parties to comply with the rules. At a recent urgent of global warming, it is clear that most pollutions caused by industrial factories. On one hand, the companies have to pay more fees for the environmental protection organizations and apply new requirement technology from authorities. On the other hand, any disposal waste from the factories should be under controlled strictly by the government.110
The most important reason why human should be responsible is that their intervention is clearly crucial for improving the environment. The potential for human beings to alter climate change was mentioned over a century ago. When people burn fossil fuels to make electricity and drive cars , they released a substantial amount of CO2 in the atmosphere. In my opinion, if people more often enjoy walking and using public transport and driving cars less it would be reduced significantly CO2 emission in the air. Moreover, choosing to use effectively energy in our homes and our workplaces there would be a significant decline the emission CO2 from electricity factories. 109
In conclusion, I would maintain that climate change is not only all governments’ responsibility but also our own activities that all is very important. The stronger governmental policies and change in mind people’s behavior the better we can get in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25846153846 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11577480215 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618461538462 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4910554813 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.071428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194784704672 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06039797584 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371326624495 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109370392725 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00871662190901 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.