Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only government and big companies can make a difference to what extent do you agree or disagree
It is incontrovertible fact that environmental protection become a most essential issue for all over world. While, few masses accord that it is the responsibility of authority and large companies to protect environment. This essay disagree with this statement as they can never do anything without the help of people.
To embark with, the masses has great contribution to decrease the pollution and improve the places where they live. For example, if everyone saves one piece of paper everyday, nearly a millions tress can saved in one day. As well as, eco-friendly behaviours of public can protect the environment. If they will not prefer to use plastic bags and, the sale of this product will decrease. The companies will replace it with the eco-friendly products like fabric bags. So, the people have power to save the atmosphere.
However, it would be wrong to say the authority and large industries has no role to save environment. The government makes the rule and regulation and it is the duty of mobs to follow it. Also, the can solve some large-scale problems like deforestation and greenhouse effects. Moreover, the companies can invest the money to control the pollution as well as they can use other energy sources which will not harmful for eco-system.
In conclusion, everyone is responsible to protecting our planet and everyone should use their power and resources to save it. Then, this problem is nothing and easily curb out with some major steps.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e, if everyone saves one piece of paper everyday, nearly a millions tress can saved in o...
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Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a million'
Suggestion: a million
...ves one piece of paper everyday, nearly a millions tress can saved in one day. As well as,...
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Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'millions'' or 'million's'?
Suggestion: millions'; million's
...s one piece of paper everyday, nearly a millions tress can saved in one day. As well as,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05349794239 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86951991177 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59670781893 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1408827971 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.8666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151752102816 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460581783058 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462290606009 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869739858961 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453779343786 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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