Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Never have environmental concerns gone as viral as they do now. It is argued that environmental issues fail to be tackled on an individual scale, they should rather be solved exclusively by authorities and broad corporations. In my opinion, I partially agree with the given assertion, as both can do their best to ameliorate environmental degradation.
To commence with, recycling can be the only way for individuals to care about the surroundings. More precisely, individuals should be encouraged to recycle their waste after using them for their own benefit. In this way, wastage is averted from being disposed of into the sea or the need for landfills will be eliminated, which preserves arable lands against soil erosion. So, not only governments, but also people themselves are able to take steps against environmental problems.
However, governments and companies can combat environmental pollution on a greater scale. For instance, laws regarding environmental preservation should be implemented by governments in order to make it mandatory for everyone to save the environment. When it comes to companies, they must voluntarily cut down on the amount of waste they get rid of and turn to alternative sources of energy such as windmills. Gradually, law-abiding companies and governments will make their enormous contributions to the environment.
In conclusion, as long as the assistance of individuals, governments as well as companies is involved, environmental concerns will then be avoided. Therefore, a balanced view is presented above. It is predicted that if environmental taint is escaped at all costs, a safe future will be created for many people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43846153846 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34548180696 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638461538462 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9532008737 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148034051954 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596635100934 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582482356321 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900058318995 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392294573418 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.