Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns. Do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that permission for using guns is not advisable. I totally agree with this notion for several reasons discussed below.
The availability of guns can trigger dangerous and aggressive behaviors. In fact, individuals often have different and even opposite perspectives and personalities, which can lead to serious conflicts unsolved. In such situations, people may not be able to control their anger and frustration, and if guns are allowed to use, the consequences could be threatening and terrifying. For example, immature youngsters having arguments with their peers about romantic relationships can be dangerously violent and cruel with guns. In fact, teenager nowadays can be addicted to video games containing violent contents that may have negative impacts on their actions.
The allowance of gun using can destroy a country's peace and happiness. People would start to act uncontrollably since it is quite impossible for authorities to prevent gun users from breaking laws. Criminals would commit crimes more often as they can threaten victims with guns, resulting in more unethical behaviors such as human trafficking and sexual abuse. As a result, people would live in fear and be scared of law violators carrying guns and weapons. Moreover, war can be fired among countries with the lack of gun using regulations, leading to a chaotic world.
In conclusion, the ability of owing guns can pose serious threats on humans and their living quality. It is essential for governments to ban individuals from using guns to ensure that people can live in peace and harmony.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t people can live in peace and harmony.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34782608696 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91130801405 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612648221344 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9706115274 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190985408456 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736683100967 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471364391872 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112638029445 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269909249609 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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