Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss and give your opinion.
It is sometimes argued that people have a sole responsibility of paying taxes to society while others believe that there are more necessary contributions which should be made by citizens instead of just paying that amount of money. I am of the opinion that inhabitants should play their parts in building an environmentally friendly society to make the world a better place.
It is quite understandable why some people think that paying taxes can be enough for one to contribute to society. Citizens paying taxes often allow governments to enhance infrastructure and construct public facilities. This is because an enormous amount of money is needed every year to upgrade roads, traffic lights, bridges, public schools and the so on. By imposing taxes on people, governments would have enough financial sources to achieve those targets.
However, I contend that taxes are not enough since environmental problems are becoming more severe and money cannot resolve the issues. In fact, air, water and noise pollutions are deteriorating the environment which is also our shared home-Earth. The primary reasons are that people have released their untreated waste into rivers and oceans, overused plastic bags for shopping, emitted exhaust fumes from vehicles. Those activities have had negative effects on not only people's lives but also animals' lives, leading to climate change and greenhouse effect. The solution to this problem is not related to money, it requires people's attitude towards society as a whole to stop them from harming the environment.
In conclusion, while some people believe that, they can contribute perfectly to community just by paying taxes, I concur that money is not the optimal solution to tackle the most alarming problem that the whole society is facing at the moment - global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32638888889 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74116153251 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618055555556 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2266256117 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.833333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392888451798 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123763738275 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102240688098 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222386175973 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685145147663 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.