Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that information technology is now affecting various aspects of our lives and playing an important role in our daily activities. While this development still has its own drawbacks, I think there are far more benefits.
On the one hand, the domination of information technology has had some negative impacts on our daily lives. Through the Internet, people now can perform various tasks by just some simple clicks on the computer. However, it is leading to the problem of people being obsessed with the virtual world and starting to lose interactions in real life. For example, most young adults prefer chatting with their friends on the Internet than having face-to-face conversations. The technology advances also make people become lazier, therefore, affect their levels of health and fitness. More and more people are taking up watching TV or surfing the Internet as their hobbies instead of playing sports or doing outdoor activities.
On the other hand, I believe that the development of computer scienece has made a lot of positive changes to our daily lives. In home activities, technology allows people to do their houseworks in a more convenient and efficient way. Housewives no longer need to go to the supermarket to by groceries and food, instead, they can stay at home and do their shopping on online markets. In leisure activities, we now have a wide variety of entertainments which include high-tech experiences such as multi-dimensions cinema or virtual exhibitions. People also have access to the rich online sources of entertainment and can easily turn their house into a mini cinema or theater. In work activities, the invention of machines makes it easier to do hard labor works and helps increase the productivity of producing goods.
In conclusion, information technology is altering our lives in both positive and negative ways. However, the benefits of this development are undeniable.
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Reading Taxi Service
Taxi Tunbridge Wells
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22580645161 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9692773027 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587096774194 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.280612631 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.25 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299122217608 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935528938785 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104912025173 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202640712399 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05744036585 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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