International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places At the same time there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages
Tourism industry has progressed by leaps and bounds since the outset of the globalization. In modern era, tourism has been the backbone of the economies in many countries around the world. Certainly, it has offered tremendous benefits to the governments and the local people, except some of the harmful effects.
Coming to the advantages of promoting tourism, firstly, it provides numerous opportunities of employment to many people and they can work for their livelihood. As hospitality sector further has many work sectors associated to it, people get jobs in many forms. It helps to reduce the rate of unemployment and give people chance to live their lives more conveniently.
Furthermore, tourism contributes in the development of a country as people from different places visit and utilise various services in the host country. They love to eat local food in local restaurants and pay for accommodation as well. In turn, it helps these industries to grow and exchange of currency also boost the economy.
However, some of the adverse effects can not be ignored while appreciating the benefits related to tourism.The most prominent is the deterioration of natural beauty as many beautiful places are now being cleared to build hotels for the tourists. Secondly, environmental problems are also being witnessed such as visitors throwing used plastic products and rubbish here and there. Due to the visits of people from different places at a local famous place, local people are being influenced by the foreign culture. It is definitely causing threat to their own unique culture.
After analysing both the aspects of this problem, it can be suggested that effective government policies can make tourism a beneficial sector. So, the negative effects can be overcome easily and maximum profit can be obtained from travel industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31399317406 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87172111124 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597269624573 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4860761505 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169985521698 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549796638471 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427204429523 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937371416672 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372463246003 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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