International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country that they visited. Do advantages outweight the disadvantages?
Travelling in foreign countries has been invested vividly because of a wide range of benefits. I totally agree that this phenomenon creates far more advantages than downsides to both individuals and host nations those I would like to shed light on below.
To begin with, it is easy to sgnificantly indicate some of positive impacts of traveling abroad to the travllers. People have opportunities to widen their mind thanks to accessing other untapped values such as culture, custom and people. On top of that, traveling outside our country is considered as the optimum solution of entertainment and stabilizing our overwhelming lifes.
On the other hand, nations in which create a great push to the development of this industry also gain the variety of wonderful profound influences. Tourism in foreign country is the potential business that breeds massive profits where governments optimise its superiorities. Is becomes a driving force of soaring development inspiring other related sectors. Following this, individuals’s incomes have been rised and then leading to a whole country. The last but not least, reputations of these nations have been literally reiforced thanks to preserving and popularising their lived values of civilizations, histories and sceneries.
In contrast, both travellers and host countries can be prone to some challenges in terms of international traveling. In one hand, whether the authorities ensure the great security for their visitors because these people can get trouble with antisocial attackers and kidnapping. In the other hand, such a huge industry is in need of huge fundings. Talk is cheap whereas the major nations worldwide do not have enough deep-pocketed companies pouring money into the business and then their ambitions to achieve this big dream tend to face barriers.
In conclusion, I completely believe that the travellers and the country where they visit can obtain much more benefits than drawbacks in terms of international tourism. Basically, this industry can embody the certain image of the host country that go beyond our expectation. The key point is the way we generate its advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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...th antisocial attackers and kidnapping. In the other hand, such a huge industry is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, whereas, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41666666667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00730756816 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60119047619 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5570631579 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.058823529 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195854215798 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543021437649 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070469418252 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108012361081 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054426075366 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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