Internet
In this state-of-the-art era, educational life has been experiencing movement to the digital based learning. Therefore, ther is an opinion saying that every lesson should be based on internet as the best term to educate children. Personally, I agree with this statement. This essay will discuss this view and other ways to educate children.
To begin, internet, nowadays, has been accessible to everyone, including children, meaning that children will be more effectively in learning process. It is because internet provides plethora sources that pupils need, just by surfing on that. Close up to this, some online courses provider offer free course to the pupils that fit to them. By joining this, it helps the development of Intelligence Quotient (IQ) of children and making them independently in finding information. Furthermore, internet-based learning bring positive side in stimulating children about environmental issues in early ages. By applying paper-less program in school, such as conducting internet-based exam rather than paper-based exam, implicitly, children will realize that every action should be pro-environment.
In spite of this, internet also has drawback to children such as children tend to allocate more time on playing game than study. However, it seems to me that it is not a big major problem as long as the parents can control the children's act at home, while, the government also already ban the games which have negative side to the children's brain development.
To optimize those, study club play an important role to improve social skill and it also has benefit to team building skill that will be needed in the working life to the children in the future. Finally, practical method also helps learners to actualized the theory that children have learned.
In conclusion, internet is helping children to their brain development and making learning process more sufficient. In addition, peer group discussion and practical activities are still required to build up social skill and practical skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to process'
Suggestion: to process
...en will be more effectively in learning process. It is because internet provides pletho...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'courses'' or 'course's'?
Suggestion: courses'; course's
... on that. Close up to this, some online courses provider offer free course to the pupil...
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Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bring'
Suggestion: to bring
...n. Furthermore, internet-based learning bring positive side in stimulating children a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42767295597 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9557607309 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1788303771 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19941288362 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806164734426 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935675094507 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111176434666 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772414576105 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.