The internet means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The internet has grown to be one of the most effective means for trip planning. however, it is often people argue that there is no point in traveling overseas when you can see and gain knowledge about other nations and countries, although I agree internet has many positive effects on traveling experience, I would argue about personal traveling
The Internet provides people a wide range of information about all countries across the world. with internet assistance, people can easily be in touch with any information they are into by using any searching engines such as google or video or streaming platforms. When people are interested in knowing about a place, they can surf the net to find the relevant information.
Sometimes, the immersive nature of virtual reality enables everyone to experience a version of tourist attractions, hotels, and any places they desire. besides Google, Youtube, Twitch can give people access to videos, information, and images. Therefore, people do not need to travel across the world to gain knowledge about their culture and traditions. In other words, travelers should not get around to gain their best experience because not only can they find appropriate information about many historical places, and tourist attractions, but because of the internet, they can have a virtual traveling to a place they like.
To sum up, since technology is improving day by day, people do not require to travel to other countries to learn about their culture and lifestyles and enjoy the historic places
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, such as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1814516129 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72346423038 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.0580616538 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.777777778 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219819387076 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903576172324 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692177756629 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14140078714 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361150059862 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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