Internet technology means people do not need to travel to foreign countries
to understand how others live. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the digital revolution has enabled a growing number of people to gain access
to information about how others live in different countries. While such advances in
technology have made more information available, I only agree in part that this had led to
a greater understanding of the lives of those in other countries.
On the one hand, the tourist trade has experienced phenomenal growth, but this does not
mean that those who visit foreign countries leave with any appreciation of the culture or
living conditions of the local people. Holiday resorts such as Phuket in Thailand are
thronged with tourists at the height of the holiday season. However, overseas visitors
remain completely oblivious to how the local inhabitants live. They experience luxury
hotels, sunbathe on beaches, or at most go sightseeing on guided tours. To know how
people in Thailand live, they would learn much more by watching documentaries or
analytical reports on the internet at home.
On the other hand, there are intrepid travelers who prefer to discover for themselves the
culture and daily lives of those in foreign countries which they visit. They avoid package
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21465968586 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74369528547 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659685863874 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6791957513 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222697527525 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782051672687 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587431320912 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067916115644 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436008862731 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.