Internet when used as a source of information, has more drawbacks than advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
The Internet has turned our existence upside down. It has changed the way people nowadays access the information by just a click of a button. However, not all the data reported on the internet seems to be reliable. In my own perspective, the disadvantages when internet used as a huge storage of information outweigh the advantages of using it as a reference.
There are many reasons why more and more people rely on the internet as their news source. Firstly, the Internet stands a good chance of providing up-to-the-minute news as it happens. In fact, anyone who has access to a smart phone and an internet connection can now find information about their choice across the globe within a matter of seconds. For example, statistics in Harvard University depicts that in a day, about 4,000 students use the public internet that is available inside the campus, which shows that the internet is used exhaustively among the younger generation to search for any information to be fetched in no time.
In contrast, using the internet as a main source of information can lead to many dangerous effects among people. First of all, the internet allows anyone and everyone to be a writer and a publisher. No one will ask them whether they are qualified to do so. As a result, some inappropriate contents including graphic violence, sex scenes, and sexual connotations have been appeared, which become an issue that negatively shapes people’s views especially children’s. Another disadvantage of internet information is the amount of fake news has been significantly increased in recent years to draw the public’s attention, which leads to degrading the degree of authenticity.
In conclusion, there are several drawbacks which outweigh the advantages of using the internet as a source of data. Only by having a good grasp of choosing the information can we take our roots from distorted news.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The Internet has turned our existence up...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06037215254 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6052629435 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168672755037 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614140118287 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537255625352 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108773849011 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164211387104 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.