In this morden era, youngsters are getting advice from old people in order to avoid wrong decision in life. Some people believe that it is beneficial for youngsters to advise form their elders, others believe that it not beneficial. I accord with first notion. Both of the points are discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, it is more profitable for youngsters to take advice from their elders is because they have more life experience . Therefore, they are able to give right answer with proper explanation to young masses. Aa a result, it confirmed that taking advice from elders is
good. A study conducted in delhi shows that children who takes help from their elders to solve puzzles performed 62% more efficient than others who was not taking any help.
On the contrary, it is also believed that some time's given advice from elderly people are wrong. Because elderly people are conservative and old fashioned. So they don't understand the aspects of modern world in which they have to lose their traditional thinking . Outcome of this is insignificant opinion . For example, if we ask are grandparents for helping us to deside a dress for a occasion they always suggest an dress which is out dated.
To conclude, it is true that old people give best advice in certain fields but not good in fashion. Appart from that they have more life experience
which always help them to give efficient advice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, for example, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92531120332 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51972532661 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56846473029 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3407331914 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1333333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251211694015 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811194052794 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681894428533 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11509918095 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697195091989 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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