It is certainly difficult for people in cities to do physical exercise. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?
It is true that urban lifestyle often results in people being less active. There are a number of reasons for this but also there are some potential solutions to this problem.
To begin with, city life is expensive and people spend most their day working to provide their needs. Therefore, they do not have enough time or energy to work out after a long day at work. For instance, when I was working in Istanbul, I would leave at 7 am to go to work and I came back home at 8 pm feeling exhausted. A great way to solve this problem is that companies could install fitness centres at the workplace for employees. So people can exercise during their lunch break and this would be beneficial for employees as well as the company since exercising improves productivity.
Time is not the only limitation city dwellers face. In urban areas, they also lack space to exercise. People who live in the countryside can go for a walk or run in nature surrounding them without the interference of traffic or other dangers. Unfortunately, this is not possible for people living in cities. In my city, for example, there are no public parks or frosted area where citizens can work out. To solve this issue governments should invest money in building more open areas and facilities within the cities to encourage locals to spend more time active.
In conclusion, people in cities do not exercise enough due to limitations of time and space. However, governments and employers can solve this problem by building facilities where people can exercise.
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- Some people say students should be given more homework Others say that children should be free to enjoy their youth Discuss both views and give your opinion 69
- A knowledge of maths is not important for most jobs nowadays To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement 85
- Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other while others think that people have become more independent Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76691729323 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61618483441 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8346700236 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359074489425 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121263549577 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865697974594 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245260490432 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491711161888 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.