It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is not even an iota of doubt that children are the backbone of a country and their development is crucial. Therefore, many a person opines that media, pop culture and peers have a negative impact on the child's mental growth; however, others hold a contrasting perception denoting that parents play a key role. I hold the same school of thought, that family is the most important aspect for a child’s development.
On the one hand, the increasing influence of media and pop culture into our lives has had a negative impact on children. To explain this, due to the development of technology, media and pop culture are readily available to a child these days and children are not able to sift out inappropriate information from it. In other words, this information obtained from the media or friends is shaping children's minds in the wrong direction. For example, American Pediatric Association in a weekly journal said that nowadays there are certain toy ads that are made specifically for children. Should these advertisements are be shown to them, they would force their parents into buying them. Therefore, children should avoid the use of media and learn more from books than pop culture references. At a very young age, a child tends to spend most of his time with parents and it becomes the responsibility of them to inculcate adequate ethics in them. The more good values are imparted, the better holistic growth an offspring gets
On the other hand, a child in his early days of life is malleable and acquires the habits and behaviors of their progenitors. To be precise, it is the family that helps in the development of behavior and instills their conventions into children which benefit the child later in life. In other words, these conventions and rituals help them behave in a way which is both advantageous for them and also the society. Sir Henry Osborn, a famous novelist, said that “mother is the first school of a child where he learns the basic instincts for survival. Hence, family is undoubtedly the most important factor for a child’s future. At a very young age, a child tends to spend most of his time with parents and it becomes the responsibility of them to inculcate adequate ethics in them. The more good values are imparted, the better holistic growth an offspring gets.
All in all to conclude, having said that, although, pop culture, media and friends are responsible for the development of a child to a certain degree, I believe that families are where they should learn the way of life for a better future. I hope that these media sources meant to destroy a child's mental development had better be stopped.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2208.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 455.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85274725275 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70878920268 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452747252747 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1019971156 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.210526316 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9473684211 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190978078421 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644112382419 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453841562896 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134157726396 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227058617078 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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