It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes called that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
In this competitive era, to be successful in perticular field is not a piece of cake for every child.It requires special talent and intelligence.Many humans have faith that talent is the thing which develope by born in child.While, others vote that it can be created by special training and hardwork.Both aspects are examined in this essay.
To embark with, people who believes that talent like sports and music is a boon by born argue that, this intelligance are blessings of god to some children. Also, sometimes it comes in heredity by their parents. Sachin Tendulkar's son as an example, we know that Sachin is very successful cricketer. His son Arjun also play very impressive. It is inheritance of intelligance.
Oh other hand, it is undeniable that every child is special if we land a hand with proper guidance they can also reach at peak of any dezired field. Moreover, if parents and teachers create an environment with vision of providing specialized training along with perticular stage to grow more than it will definately get good result. To cite an example, one experiment done in Germany by scientists proved that, children who learn with expert's suggesations and tution were able to improve their performance day to day.
In a nut shell, some childeren are blessed by god with talent. But, i believe that it is undoubtable fact that factors such as training, guidance and hardwork can make any child talented.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87784604595 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644351464435 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.5358414075 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.636363636 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254892278667 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758207879963 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724551222117 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14126834468 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266058148506 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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