It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, It is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nature or nurture? These are challenging terms in human mind. In my opinion our talent exactly refers to our genes (nature) and this is us that choose to breed them or suspend them. Furthermore, we can not never ignore the influences of training (nurture) in flourishing our intelligence.
Being a prosper musician or sportsman such as many skills have straight relation with our nature. Furthermore, there are many people who effort days and nights for reaching the apex of their dreams in field of music and sports. However, they can not reach their aims because of their internal abilities. It is obvious that by hard works and training our minds we are able to be among best musicians or sportsman and sportswoman, but if we don’t have talent, being the first and the best among others can be approximately impossible. Unfortunately, we are seeing parents that without having enough information and knowledge about their children’s talent, insist on making their child a hero in field of music or sports that in majority of times poses inverse consequences. Although, having talent does not mean that without any efforts and trainings, we are able to be the bests.
Beside nature, we should never forget nurture. Because there are many talented persons that have never efforts in order to devise their talents and train them for fulfilling special things or even learn what their inner interactions want. Therefore, if we have talent, they should be trained and should be strengthened. Music, sports or many other skills need both nature and nurture of specific man to have hero in themselves. Besides, we should not forget that sometimes continuous and hard training without having strong talent defeat the full talented rivals with no enough efforts.
All in all, if we are fond of something, music or sports, we should try to don’t forget efforts and hard works in order to would not blame ourselves by looking to our past. Therefore, if you like it try hard without considering your nature.
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...nd training our minds we are able to be among best musicians or sportsman and sportswoman,...
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...mately impossible. Unfortunately, we are seeing parents that without having enoug...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00597014925 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62113690113 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531343283582 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0928537865 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6470588235 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173975897238 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559597215321 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407448086349 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936623643667 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681991550359 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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