Everyone, at least in his/her dreams imagines that he/she would change variety of things in her/his life. However, sometimes we risk in our life for creating huge changes in order to obtain some positions and facilities. Therefore, if risks bring prosperous and wealth or any convenience, they become prosper changes in our life, and if they do not, we try to risk again and maybe stop changing. Furthermore, human beings have always prefer convenience, and this causes to always seek the changes.
In majority of times, people are chasing better positions in their social and personal life and everyone needs to be optimistic in the beginning stages of deciding for changes. Therefore, if risks cause positive results, they highly would affect people’s life. Increasing self-esteem, self-confidence, mental and physical health and causing better interactions in life, all can be the influence of positive results of risks. It is important to know that having affordability for covering life expenses makes people think more about creating varieties in their life.
Humankind is a social creature and from the beginning of life, he/she has been in interaction with others. Therefore, if someone prefers having a life without changes, maybe can not be able to have enough and right interactions with her/his friends or even family members. Because, everything and everyone are changing and it spontaneously affects our life and make some changes.
Sometimes, our risks do not cause good results and they fail. Therefore, all of our thoughts, efforts, programs, aims and dreams stop suddenly and make drastic mental effects. Furthermore, it is important to be aware of how should we do in such situations. If we are able to construct everything from the beginning by the true way, we can overcome and get positive results. But if we are not able to mange the situation we become a failure and never want to create changes in our life. Therefore, we should have big picture of what we want to change in order to prevent drastic problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 435, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
.... Furthermore, human beings have always prefer convenience, and this causes to always ...
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Line 7, column 517, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'pictured'.
Suggestion: pictured
...our life. Therefore, we should have big picture of what we want to change in order to p...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er to prevent drastic problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19161676647 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78323971677 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517964071856 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6495494545 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118364283474 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443023815738 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317376975761 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767315034404 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367201356461 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.