Is it good for children to start using computers for an early age and spend long hours on them advantages and disadvantages

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...rn epoch,Time of science and technology.It develops rapidly and makes human life e...
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Suggestion: Computer
...ops rapidly and makes human life easier.Computer is electronic gazette gift of technolog...
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... gazette gift of technology for society.Nowadays people becoming technosavy.It leads to ...
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...ety.Nowadays people becoming technosavy.It leads to nation development.Therefore,c...
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...chnosavy.It leads to nation development.Therefore,children spend numerous hours on comput...
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Suggestion: , children
...It leads to nation development.Therefore,children spend numerous hours on computer is not...
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...ous hours on computer is not acceptable.Howerer,children start using computer from earl...
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...rs on computer is not acceptable.Howerer,children start using computer from early age has...
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... well as, helps in holistic development.Moreover,children learn umpteen things from comp...
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..., helps in holistic development.Moreover,children learn umpteen things from computer.they...
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...se computer for educational purpose also,as a source of entertainment likewise,sear...
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...so,as a source of entertainment likewise,search topic which they can not understand in ...
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Suggestion: Whereas
...ddition learn easy strategy of learning.Whereas,In leisure time use to listen music,wat...
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... learn easy strategy of learning.Whereas,In leisure time use to listen music,watchi...
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...egy of learning.Whereas,In leisure time use to listen music,watching movies and pla...
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...reas,In leisure time use to listen music,watching movies and playing games. On the dar...
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...s and playing games. On the dark side,spend ample of hours to use computer haddles ...
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...h problems like week eye sight,headache.Another noticeable thing is that,it develops be...
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...eadache.Another noticeable thing is that,it develops behaviour problems likewise, P...
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...oblems likewise, Poor attention disorder,loose their concentration in studies.In addit...
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...blems likewise, Poor attention disorder,loose their concentration in studies.In addit...
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...er,loose their concentration in studies.In addition,parlonged sitting habits devel...
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...eir concentration in studies.In addition,parlonged sitting habits develop obesity.Also,mak...
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...arlonged sitting habits develop obesity.Also,make children introvert and home worm. ...
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...ntrovert and home worm. In my opinion,'excess of every thing is bad'.Allo...
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...apos;excess of every thing is bad'.Allow chindren to use technology but also, eq...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.51707317073 5.12529762239 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.67838702712 2.80592935109 167% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.726829268293 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.077680188 49.4020404114 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 267.2 106.682146367 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.0 20.7667163134 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 23.4 7.06120827912 331% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299971131094 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151840869146 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900512488177 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16532086828 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080298824892 0.056905535591 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 13.0946893788 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.98 50.2224549098 -8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 21.42 12.4159519038 173% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.52 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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