Time and time again, the possible aspects have been emerging out clear and stronger in terms of putting forth the fact that adults shows increased productivity in terms of providing quick responsive ideas than geriatric population. It is said that younger population is more responsive than older population however others feels that having expertise experience is also important. Influenced by and also acknowledging a pattern of miscellaneous opinions and perspective, I potentially reckon that adults shoud be given priority to achieve certain tasks which suits them and the experienced old people should be given the tasks which requires plethora of experience to be carried out.
people above 50 years of age have gained humongous experience in their respective field and that experience would be more important to perform various tasks such as how to invest the money, which area of the business requires more attention to be paid and how to make dealership with the customers etc. The other hand , the young workers plays vital role in the productivity of the company, they can create new ideas to meet up market strategies, advertisement of the products and various other innivative methods to flourish the business. The older workers performance will not be steady and effective in some areas because of the issues acquired by them due to age. They do possess some medical illnesses that further more effects on their mental health and they become stressed. By considering these factors they usually get retired from the work after the age of 50. I will sum up this essay by saying that ofcourse the young workers are more responsive and beneficial to the company however the experince of older workers also plays important role in the progressing development of the particular business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18900343643 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77178164787 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7390962215 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.777777778 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147658534772 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581414699043 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297831215459 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107699306276 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246660138185 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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