It has been estimated that all the world's oil could be used up within 40 years if consumption continues at the present rate. What short-term and long-term solutions can you suggest to this problem? Refer to your own country in your report.
Oil shortage is a predicted problem affecting the international energy industry. Many statistics about the remaining oil reserves are published annually and the reserves are able to deplete within 40 years. It seems like the serious problem that the world cope with. As well as considering these issues in general, this report will also examine some short-term and long-term responses to the depletion of oil, with specific reference to Vietnam.
Vietnam petrol consumption was forecast to grow rapidly. According to Business Monitor International, its growth would get more than 3 times the average of the world and rated the forty-seventh all of the nations. Despite Vietnam had a favourable geographic location for the exploitation of fossil fuels in the East Sea, it is still not enough oil to respond to the domestic consumption and Vietnam compelled to import from foreign. It is no doubt about the depletion of petrol in the exploiting areas and the volume of imported oil will increase.
There are several short-term measures which Vietnamese citizens and the government can take to deal with the problem. One vital approach is to increase oil taxes. When the government adjusts the reasonable the taxes, it will become expensive and people would slightly alter the mode of transportation, from private to public transport. Once oil becomes rarely, another solution could be taken is to apply cutting-edge technology. Electric engines, for instance, could replace internal combustion engines which consume a large amount of petrol.
In the long term, there are several measures which Vietnam can take. The vital long-term response is to apply the biofuels that made from corns or soybeans. However, because of demanding the cultivated land, it is impossible for the future when the population will exceed the allowable land area. Additionally, the government should raise funds to research renewable powers, like solar, wind or geothermal that are able to take the place of fossil fuels. If these energies are acquired in practice, the fear of lacking energy would be tackled thoroughly.
To summarize, the short and long-term measures that help Vietnam to cope with the oil shortage are available. Rising fuels taxes and using modern technology seem like the possible solutions in order to solve the problem temporarily. Besides that, figure out appropriate alternative energy could be considered in the future. In my viewpoint, using alternative energy is feasibility and high-effective response to exhaustively deal with the depletion of oil in Vietnam.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually put before the verb 'becomes'.
Suggestion: rarely becomes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, still, well, as for, for instance, in general, no doubt, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38366336634 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87725033721 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566831683168 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6738786303 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8636363636 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04545454545 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223057628453 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621439815146 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495984327782 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122984845716 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048061377843 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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