It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction.
Writing:
There is a fact that children play an important role in this world. they are very kind of sensitive with surrounding things, they do not have ability to distinguish between which is positive and which is not. this essay completely agree with punishment is necessary to teach kids what is right and suppose some types of punishment that is allowed to make them behave better.
The first reason for this opinion is that punishing is the most rigid method to make kids understand their attitudes is wrong. From my experience, for instance, when I was a child, I got lots of penalty from my father because of my false such as fighting with friends, salvaging, and so forth. Then, after infliction I was gradually aware of what I did was wrong, I become more mature to handle surrounding cases. it was proved that when people, especially children, come into threaten, they tend to prevent what they did.
However, the level of punishing is genuinely significant. adults or teacher must not treat children like a crime, the infants is very sensitive hence over punishing will influence negatively to their mental and psycho. it is recorded that the number of children have to suffer from autism that caused by the violence of adults accounts more 50%, according to the New Times. this shows that violent punish is not allow in teaching children. kids should be deter rather than infliction and other violent activities.
Indeed, teaching children is quite challenging and punishing is allowed and necessary to make them better, nevertheless adults should only deter instead of violent to avoid effecting immediately to children’s psycho.
- is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction. 84
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... of punishing is genuinely significant. adults or teacher must not treat children like...
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...s more 50%, according to the New Times. this shows that violent punish is not allow ...
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Suggestion: Kids
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Message: Did you mean 'deterred'?
Suggestion: deterred
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10622710623 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6841745035 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3849343017 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176003286673 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061345735232 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431844543446 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109622561123 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286170835049 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.