It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives.
Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?
People believe that in both career and personal life, taking risks is crucial. This figure can have benefits greater weight than drawbacks.
On the one hand, there can be several disadvantages when people take risks. First, it can cost a lot of money when make a risky decision. For example, if a person makes a career switch or sets up a company, they may have to pay a lot for infrastructure and staff. The same can be true of buying something installment purchase. Besides, risks can lead to some physical and emotional damage. In human life, some people would like to chase risks by taking part in dangerous activities. However, there are many reports that kinds of activities can make them disabled or eventually die.
On the other hand, taking risks can give people many advantages than drawbacks. To begin with, risks can help people gain lots of experiences and skills such as confidence, independence, and problem-solving skill. For instance, if parents do not give teenagers opportunities to solve every problem in life by themselves, they may rely on adults all the time. Also, taking risks can change people’s lives when their decisions achieve great success. Such as Bill Gates dropped out of Harvard and focused on his Microsoft foundation, which became a technical revolution in the world.
In conclusion, the benefits of taking risks are more significant than the drawbacks, both in professional and personal lives.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0970464135 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81546230051 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628691983122 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9316435758 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.5333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34135365514 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115768728964 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113563525831 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223125390552 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042363959745 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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