It is arguable that, it would not plausible to consider all nations as a whole and authorities indulge in providing help to every country people . According to me , it is up to some extent favorable if developed community aid to progressing state . This essay examine the facts and provide some relevant examples.
The chief rationalization for my agreement comes from heterogenous points. Firstly the most discernible nub is ,it is prominent aim of any government to work for welfare of its own society . To clarify it, if authorities collect tax from their own country people then it should be deployed in aiding them infrastructure, education and healthcare facilities. Therefore , regional executive must do effort for endemic . Moreover, while facilitate its original ones it would also lend a great hand in economic boosts. To explain it, as more the citizens educated and qualified more the occasion of booming its financial situation. So it is very fruitful and beneficial to flourish any nation thereby promoting its own masses.
Probing towards other view point ,it is open secret that if progressed directorate pay a heed in seeking the challenges of under mature country then it would be advantageous for both nations. An optimal example is , if multi national companies opened in destitute country then organization easily find a low cost and hardworking labor that leads to enhance productivity . Additionally, it would also create abundant opportunity to overcome with issues of evolving country such as poverty, educational amenities and unemployment. Hence, many nation should emerged as great assistance in enlighten the deficient state.
To wrap up ,although world is seems now as a global village yet, innumerable country deprived from prerequisites and faculty which they need to surge their citizens and that only be possible with the help of other nations. That is why, strong relationship between nation and agreement can only make this happen .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31511254019 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01252431266 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649517684887 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4969982604 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.3125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18133998512 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491433702552 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526567815175 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992254702291 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287241579873 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.