It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to bring their children up.
agree or disagree
In recent decades, and due to the technology development, the shape of growing children up also have changed completely in compared to the past. This event maybe create some problem for parents. Some people believe that parents should spend a training course for upbringing their children. I strongly agree with this idea for several reasons. Two of the most important my reasons have mentioned as follows.
Participate parents in training course can help to demonstrate a right reaction to the children behavior. These days, children access to the information such as, picture, film, documents etc. through media like internet, and TV have much easy. Nonetheless, among whole of the beneficial subjects, some of this information may be have detrimental influences on the children. The kind of parents reaction about it، can have destructive impacts on children at the future such as, join gangs or juvenile delinquency. Recent research show that, the banning of the children from using internet or social media have a reverse result, likewise absolute freedom also, has deleterious effects. Unfortunately, majority of parents select one of the above ways. I think if they spend a training course, it assists them to get a right decision when confront with this problem.
Not having enough time for being with children can influence on the shape of their upbringing. Nowadays, male and female have to work as full-time job because of economy problem. The lack of closeness in families can have a negative impact on children. Therefore, utilizing from a right method for bringing children up is seemed vital. If the families attend in training courses, they getting to know with the behavior of new generation and thus, they can respond better and sooner to their child’s wishes.
To sum up, I believe that, giving training to the parents about the right ways of child’s upbringing، can have positive impacts on the children life at future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reaction to the children behavior. These days, children access to the information...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, i think, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25316455696 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74905666185 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2442680146 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3684210526 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6315789474 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312094008854 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955564052206 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090876943278 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197413157787 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382069307616 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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