With the development of different transport it can be possible for scientists and tourists to visit the remote natural environment. Although unique species can be found from researches and more excitement activity can be done by the tourists, pollution can become major problem and can effect the living creatures. This essay will argue that some of the benefits and drawbacks of these travel.
The foremost benefits is that, scientists can found some rare and important species and this place also the attraction for the tourists. Scientists can also go through lots of experiment which is related to the climate change. For the tourists they can doing some activity which is not possible in their hometown. moreover, these activity also help the tourists to the refreshment and more fun. South pole, as an example, interesting for the people who love the snow activity. To summaries, these place can lead to the new experiment and attraction for the people.
On the other hand, pollution can increase and effect the local species. Further pollution can damage the natural environment. sometimes experiment get reverse effect on the nature. For instance, Global warming effect is increasing due to the pollution and the temperature of the earth is also increasing. To add up, these development has a greater drawbacks.
To overall, it is a easy to visit the remote natural environment place for the scientists and traveler. The main advantages are it will create a chance to see new things and main disadvantages are these place can be damage by the humans.
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- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment such as South Pole Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 61
- Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 56
- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries but it does not solve poverty Therefore developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees while others have free entry Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...g creatures. This essay will argue that some of the benefits and drawbacks of these travel....
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...imate change. For the tourists they can doing some activity which is not possible in ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...hich is not possible in their hometown. moreover, these activity also help the tourists ...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this activity' or 'these activities'?
Suggestion: this activity; these activities
...t possible in their hometown. moreover, these activity also help the tourists to the refreshme...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sometimes
...ion can damage the natural environment. sometimes experiment get reverse effect on the na...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this development' or 'these developments'?
Suggestion: this development; these developments
...he earth is also increasing. To add up, these development has a greater drawbacks. To overall,...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...greater drawbacks. To overall, it is a easy to visit the remote natural enviro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78138166823 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50390625 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9007521409 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23240235328 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819291262124 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807065674493 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13887403072 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517167297457 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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