It is important to consider whether government should subsidize the wildlife preservation program or invest money on other pressing issues of the country. Some people are of the opinion that government is spending extravagantly to forestall wildlife destruction rather than the pressing issues of the countries at hand. In my opinion, it is better to invest money on alarming problems that require urgent attention, such as poverty and health care services
To begin with, majority of the countries are facing far greater issues than the wildlife extinction. One of the most obvious problems is the poverty, which has been restraining the progression of many nations. Because of extreme poverty, one-third of the world’s population is living a miserable life devoid of food and shelter. For instance, a recently published United Nation’s report stated that a shocking proportion of people die out of hunger and unhygienic living condition every year in many parts of the world. If the countries had spent more money on eradication of poverty instead of ensuring the protection of exotic animals, then those people could have easily been saved. Moreover, it is illogical to spend billions of dollars to prevent extermination of animal kingdom, when thousands of our own species are dying due to avoidable causes.
Another point to consider is that the health care services of developing countries are not as much updated as the developed countries. This is because medical sector has always been poorly funded by the world leaders, which has ultimately caused catastrophic damage in establishing health care services for the people. To make matters worse, some of the nations do not even have enough doctors, medicines or equipment to meet the health-care demands of the growing population. Because of this reason, countless people die an early death each year without getting access to the primary health services. Therefore, instead of squandering money on endangered animals which are already on the brink of extinction, government should try to save its own people who are dying because of mere cold and fever.
In conclusion, after analyzing the above discussion, it is quite evident that problems like poverty and health care needs require immediate financial assistance from the government for the welfare of the human civilization. After all, the value of human lives matter more than any other living beings.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... for the people. To make matters worse, some of the nations do not even have enough doctors...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, then, therefore, third, after all, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31688311688 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77076757901 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.161277653 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.466666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149554698029 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480732258462 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456663309656 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931632207616 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506346971779 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... for the people. To make matters worse, some of the nations do not even have enough doctors...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, then, therefore, third, after all, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31688311688 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77076757901 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.161277653 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.466666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149554698029 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480732258462 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456663309656 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931632207616 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506346971779 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.