It is said that people’s life now is becoming more and more stressful. What do you think are the cause of this? What solutions can you suggest?
It is widely acknowledged that stress in people’s life is becoming more widespread among many people these days. In this essay, I will elaborate on these problems, and propose a number of feasible methods to be adopted.
There are myriad different causes that human beings can deal with current issues, the most significant of which are the volume of work and the enhancement of living. With regard to the former, the working environment is becoming more competitive, and people tend to spend longer hours at work to finish all the tasks. For example, the staff can spend more than 10 hours per day at the company to accomplish all the deadlines. When it comes to the latter, people are willing to work as much as possible to earn money to pay for their lives. For instance, an employee is not only working as a salesperson but is seeking other jobs to earn more an amount of money.
Practical measures should be taken into consideration to alleviate the condition, linked to spending time relaxing and the government's prevention. In terms of the first idea, despite being busy, people should spend more time relaxing their bodies and minds. For example, sometimes people need to enjoy a wonderful life such as listening to music, going for walks, and watching comedy to comfort their brains. As far as the second point is concerned, authorities need to control the pricing market in the whole country. For instance, the government should prevent an increase in inflation in order to improve the cost of living for society.
In conclusion, there are good grounds for the fact that people face up to the negative emotions of stress, but the aforementioned approaches can mitigate the phenomenon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...inked to spending time relaxing and the governments prevention. In terms of the first idea,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93728222997 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67343903636 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.3757582265 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167240533762 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608126265598 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594978237317 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108658218633 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476650589405 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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