It is suggested that everyone wants to have a cars , television on and a fridge. Do disadvantage of the development for society outweight the advantage?
Nowadays ,In modern electronic equipment and transportation are considered to be basic necessities of life. A more majority of population desire to have in their lives. My opinion is benefits of this development because out of number drawbacks. To begin with positive aspects, firstly, electronic products are such as television ,fridge and vesicles in important part of life nowadays. For instance fridge are makes the life of person better because help to store food and not spoilt. Secondly, television are a source of knowledge and entertainment and spent with time in family with watch movies, drams and talk shows in leisure public prefer to have television at home .Similarly to uncomfortable on public transport and save the time in self-owned vehicles. Moreover,having own transports provide people edge are not dependent on schedule of city transport and traveling to remote areas could be possible as well. On the other side of ,few negative aspects will be also considered . Similarly with increasing number of car and polluted in environment will be smoke emitted from a vehicle is health hazard, Since the television are watch in continue with health related problem and waste the time ,with such habits in people forget the social value and norms hence refrigerator of has cfs ozon layer will be people eat the food and create health related issues. This is all product will be very expensive. To conclude with, i consider electronic products and vehicle are vital component of modern time. These necessities are the workload from live of people and the time could be spent on other productive activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15969581749 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83365487966 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.9284597742 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.083333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0836342116658 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304166145577 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032744811058 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836342116658 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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