Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result people gravitate towards buying their products What problems does this cause What could be done

Essay topics:

Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and, as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.
What problems does this cause? What could be done?

Plenitude refers to bombardment of wanted or unwanted things depends on consumers' behaviour. Large corporations have deep pockets to market and promote products persistently. This essay will delve into problems this situation cause and gauge some solutions.

There are some problems associated with this working approach. The human species is born with greed. Invariably, smart corporations are better analysing this human psychology so much that they offer hefty discount on their products. Owing to it, many local or small business are struggling to compete with them. Even though, their products are of superior quality, these never get sold out. Secondly, things are omnipresent, inviting people to buy them. Life is fecund, so are the corporations, to push their limit to sell the product, not for their benevolent objective but to make corporation larger and to have monopoly in the market. Basically, it is trap for consumer to believe in brand's prestige and quality.

To tackle this problem, there are some can be done solution. By all means, banning is not the solution. Although, in the past, government banned the ads promoting <span style="color: rgb(32, 33, 36); font-family: &quot;Google Sans&quot;, Roboto, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 24px; white-space: normal;">cigarette</span> and alcohol consumption, they are not in same the position in this case as there is nothing nasty on sale. Primarily, it is up to people who have to decide whether to accept these adverts or reject them completely. Moreover, subsidize or interest free loans by government would be a significant help for local small business person.

To conclude, this essay has highlighted the problems of this phenomenon such as: squeezing local business and having monopoly and presented some solution including rejecting completely and providing subsidized loan.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
...of wanted or unwanted things depends on consumers behaviour. Large corporations have deep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63859649123 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34904882607 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656140350877 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 77.0783091664 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5294117647 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257479212112 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750516545997 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587320307248 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147725672829 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348304540098 0.056905535591 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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