Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think younger leader would be better. Do you agree or disagree?
Today's, according to people younger leader and director would better in an organisation are normally older people. Assuredly, I have been in agreement for prefer to juvenile are preferable. but old age has more impression however ancient compare with younger which has new skills but not much event. they need high competency to be captain and had more experiences in society.
In the one hand, people under thirty five years old has considerable occasions to be head, thereafter implements their idea and creativity. For example, fresh graduated which has expertise of work, preside, modern and dexterous, they be going to bravely and be able to innovate their imagination to realization with delighted vitality. Moreover, rising generation presently be sought of its existence in the world of work, notably in enterprises to elevate the public image and visible fresh. Since one's physical and performances likewise attends the main assessments including achieving maximum work and job satisfaction accomplished by servant. Indeed, young man may establish the start-up cooperation by theirselves on contemporary technology.
On the other hand, at the moment youngster lief to be freelancer in exempt wheresoever place and work without office emphasis. Therefore, elderly people employ advantage of this opportunity and they are be going to be considered odd experienced. For pattern, older managers or directors, will hire young people who are more competent, proficient to move and refresh the company, and remunerate them for upper salaries.
To conclude, a lot of youth for nowadays offer respectfully accomplishment with modern technology, topical and keep up with the times. Accordingly, serve to superior it easy to actualized and rejuvenation given will facilitate the folk and capable to compete with another, then archaic people which is difficult to accept system changes and comply with the novelty era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52542372881 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99925491083 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674576271186 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7043108277 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.428571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189433015673 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069776559951 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146015757577 0.0667982634062 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116099780046 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108714965637 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.