Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.
In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?
Language education right now is believed to focus primarily on English but forget the mother tongue. If this tendency continues, local languages will definitely disappear. Personally, I feel that the aforementioned languages have the same role and it is essential to learn English because of its various benefits. Besides, we need to preserve local languages and there are some measures that could be taken.
First of all, it is clear that English is becoming the universal language at present. As a result of globalization, international trade creates numerous businesses and job opportunities, which requires businessmen to speak English to work with counterparts all over the world. Secondly, learning English also improves the operation of the brain. To clarify, scientific research has shown that multilingual individuals tend to be more active and remember working tasks more effectively if being compared with monolingual ones. Finally, if a person speaks English, he would have a chance to work for multinational companies and receive a high salary, as well as gaining more knowledge of his field since a great number of reference materials are written in English.
Although English brings some major advantages, the mother tongue is crucial as well. The worth mentioning here is that a local language is a part of the culture and sovereignty of a country, it links a community with its past and heritage. If this language is forgotten, there will be more possibilities for that country to lose its origins. Another factor is that the mother tongue is a connection among people in a nation. If they stop speaking their local language, they will lose a part of themselves, thereby creating conflicts and leading to the civil war at the end.
Hence, to limit the disappearance that might happen with local languages, there are several solutions that can be adopted. Firstly, schools must balance the time for English lessons and that for the learning period of the mother tongue to make sure that students could learn both in an equal way. Additionally, parents have to explain specifically for their children about the reason why youngsters must learn English and the local language at the same time. Finally, to help poor families to study languages, governments should invest extra funds in educational organizations in order for them to organize a myriad of classes and courses to provide local language lessons.
In conclusion, both English and local languages are equally important. My firm conviction is that learning English is necessary as well as keeping local languages alive. Therefore, we should concentrate on developing both English and the mother tongue in equal measure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2276.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26851851852 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90424677815 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553240740741 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2489165598 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.380952381 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38095238095 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326618043801 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100955188539 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615309405992 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193858456061 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544505169656 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.