Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.
What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions?
More and more young people are arrested by criminal activities. The increase in youth crime all around the world is an extremely serious problem nowadays. There’re many reasons of various life’s sections behind this issues.
To begin with, there’re several reasons why the number of youth crime rises dramatically. One of them could be that it would be the lacking of parent’s attention. Particularly, modern parents don’t care about their children. They would likely focus on their career. As a consequence, their children may feel abandoned so that they can easily join the path of crime. Another reason was the violence in school and the lack of teacher’s attention. These could lead to an increase in the dropout of teenager. As a result, youth delinquency is rising. Last but not least, many pictures, videos, games,information in Internet about violence, killing, robbing,….are not censored. Our young generation may be affected by those. It could make them have negative thought and study criminal behaviors. Then they would act violently as they learn bad things through Internet.
Given the aforementioned causes, There’re different actions that our society could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, parents should spend more time with their children to help them feel loved. Secondly, It recommend that teachers should punishing the bad behaviors and given more attention to their students. Consequently, teachers may help their students avoid bullying in school. Most importantly, all of the pictures, videos and information in Internet must be censored urgently by the government.
In conclusion, to reduce the rate of youth crime all over the world, our society which include government, school and family must pay more attention to our next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53571428571 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02134413931 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610714285714 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9353087597 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8095238095 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122086086454 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364241968079 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575457619908 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894723248322 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622183022833 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.26 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.