Light corporal punishment is being reintroduced in schools of UK what are the advantages and disadvantages of it? discuss .
Light corporal is that punishment in which used of hand and other things to punish the students like stick. One of most controversial issue today related to light corpal punshiment has merits outweight the demrits;should punshiment introduced in the schools or not? I am going to examine this question from both points of view.
On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that the benefits of considerably outweigh its disadvantages.The main reason for believing this is the punishment increased the afraid in the mind of students, in this way the live in discipline and do all the work in proper time. A good, illustrated is the survey by the british if the teacher give the light corporal punshiment to student they saw the improvement in their studies. Moreover, it would be a better example for the other student as well as they respect their teachers.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that if the teacher treated the student throught the punishment the student will be stressed and the student go in the dispression it is bad effect in their mind. To epitomise, a film has made in the student life in the school this movie shows how the teacher take the light corporal punishment to the student and the student go in the dispression. Furthermore, the student has not be respected their teacher who treat the children violencely so, the week relationship create between the teacher and student.
As we have been, there one number of answer to this question. On believe however, I tend to believe that the
government will be abolished and properly band this type of punishment in the society. Also, they find the other wway to solve the promblem of offsprings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82274247492 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77469852656 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531772575251 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7822384712 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156107971469 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581863789163 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576684657803 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857549690663 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527377824832 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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