Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Every country has its own language. Many people think that there are serious social and practical problems associating with who is in a foreign country where they have speak a different language from their mother tongue. I personally think that although there might be challenges to live in a country with different language, the benefits totally outweigh to the drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are many reason behind of this problem such as the main reason is that having to speak a foreign language can cause social problems is through the breakdown in understanding between people of different cultures for instance, people who live and work in abroad. They are not able to communicate properly with local people not only inconvenience in work but also in daily life too like it difficult just to buy groceries in the market because they do not know how to explain the things they look for thus on that time people felt embarrassing and put themselves in social problems.
On the other hand, I understand these arguments below I discuss earlier, however I believe that the difficulties of living in a foreign country can bring people more benefits. People try to interacting with local people can be an encouragement for him to try harder to learn the language and gradually integrate himself into the community. The problem can be solved at its roots just by mastering the language because most people feel more confident when they can express their opinions and needs freely. Furthermore, living abroad it is a great chance for people to expand their vision and knowledge by meeting new people and having new experiences in life.
In addition, technology has exited to the practical problems of the language barrier to a great extent. For example, people use Google-map, to find a location rather than asking locals about the direction and the Translator applications can very effectively translate between languages. Doing ordering food from a menu written in a foreign language is no longer an issue and thanks to technological advancement. I believe that not knowing the local language has some practical challenges but none of them is so serious.
All in all, the fact is that people may face many social and practical problems when they live abroad. I suggest that they can benefit much more from being exposed to a foreign environment.
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...and put themselves in social problems. On the other hand, I understand...
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...le and having new experiences in life. In addition, technology has exited to th...
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...lenges but none of them is so serious. All in all, the fact is that people may ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99491094148 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7256362741 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519083969466 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7699075533 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.866666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288082279228 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106985904142 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806045022322 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174855549373 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467164980205 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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