You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
- Explain why you would like the job
- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir,
I am writing to apply for the position of babysitter that is posted in the latest issue of Australian Daily.
To begin with, I just moved to Australia a couple of days ago. I am currently looking for a job in the local community to make better use of my time. With a bachelor degree in Early Childhood Education, I started my career as a teacher assistant in a local Kindergarten, where I have spend 3 years working with children at the age of 3 to 5.
Therefore, I am able to get to know about each child very quickly, and become friends with them. I was commented as hardworking, patient, and energetic, which are some of the most essential qualities working with children. Outside of work, I would love to take some time exploring the city.
Thank you for your time reading my letter. Please feel free to contact me via email@gmail.com or 123-456-789. I look forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
Sunny Mehta
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for the position o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the latest issue of Australian Daily. To begin with, I just moved to Australia...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...t in a local Kindergarten, where I have spend 3 years working with children at the ag...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g with children at the age of 3 to 5. Therefore, I am able to get to know abou...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to take some time exploring the city. Thank you for your time reading my lette...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...6-789. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Sunny Mehta
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62275449102 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82365648831 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688622754491 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8622034875 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1818181818 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181347569963 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640966107838 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607799139022 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985564027512 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364841641339 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.