There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company.
In your letter,
Describe the problems.
Explain how these problems are affecting the public.
Suggest what changes could be made.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter for seeking your attention regarding the intolerable behaviour of the public buses happening in ‘Martin Street’ for around two to three weeks.
Firstly, there are three bus stands located on this street named MS1, MS2 and MS3 from which MS1 and MS2 are at the both ends and MS3 is in the middle. However, drivers are not stooping the buses at any stop and completely skipping our street. Due to that, local community staying there need to travel to the Bill street’s bus stop which is the next location from Martin street.
Secondly, I believe that the reason behind for drivers not stopping bus is one of our street’s local resident scold one of the bus driver because he was drinking and driving the bus and risking the passenger’s life. However, from then, this ruthless behaviour began.
All in all, I need you to take legal actions accounting the people involved behind this scenario and make the buses stop on the Martin Street’s stands.
I wish to hear from you soon and see the changes on ground.
Yours faithfully,
Sunny
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79365079365 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40825033211 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0890023873 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0522184591665 0.216113520407 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278061384831 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465037197041 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0331977127735 0.12726935374 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541145441938 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.