Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems

In this day and age, person after person is moving abroad for numberous reasons, but many of them might have the same fate of living in a country that does not speak their mother tounge and that can be challenging. In fact, it can cause serious misunderstanding not only in social ocasions but also in practical situations as well. I, nonetheless, believe that the advantages of living in a country where official language is different from yours is far outweight its disadvantages.

It is undeniable that there are some major obstacles to build your life in a foreign country let alone not fluent in their language. Some social problems will often occurs such as being totally confused and wondering what is it that so funny about what that comedian on stage just said, not aware that your name is being called because of its unfamiliar pronunciation etc. Another difficulty is that one’s deficient ability to the country’s common spoken language can paint a false impression of other about them and that is never in any circumstances a delight. For instance, language barrier has caused countless individuals their dream job offer despite their possession of flying academic qualifications or extraordinary work experiences. Those are all for naught if these professionals do not have the ability to express it to the employer.

On the other hand, I side with those who disagree that the foreign language is the root of social and practical issues whilst living in a country which’s not yours. First of all, the main cause of social contronveris is that people always has different opinion about things, it was never the language spoken it was how they use their words. For example, America is famously known for their harsh internal political discussions. Secondly, language is a extremely learnable skill. In fact, it is the first skill that each individuals obtained and mastered since we were born. Therefore, there is no reason that human can not gain their proficiency on another language if given enough time.

In conclusion, eventhough a different language from your native speech is a huge setback when living in another country, I truly believe there are ways to overcome it to avoid social anf practical complications.

Votes
Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07837837838 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83147936307 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572972972973 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6839634044 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.266666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329069080739 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904751949395 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676585168411 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182237126374 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732042468776 0.056905535591 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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